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Melting Moments by ~pageburner:iconpageburner:

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Melting Moments

Rat Tat Tat
A knock at the door
I stand at the ocean
Of emotions
On the opposite shore
The knock comes again
I can’t reach the handle
My sanity
Melts away
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I'm starting to question my sanity.

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=nephthis Jan 17, 2009, 11:28:05 AM
I think we all do at some point and time. As long as you can still question it...

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I am all that is left of the creature that was once me.
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*Penfury Jan 17, 2009, 6:21:40 PM
sanity is overrated, trust me.

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Dreams are goals without the work is applied. :)
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~pageburner Jan 17, 2009, 9:49:25 PM
I am starting to realize that myself.:shh:
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*restingplace Jan 18, 2009, 6:21:20 AM
You only question your sanity!!! :paranoid:
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*denlm Jan 20, 2009, 10:41:34 AM
This was eerie... but since you are questioning your sanity, it all makes sense. Hmm? You've always sounded quite sane to me. What have I been missing? Aren't you going to invite me to the party?
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Mood: Tired ~froz33 Jan 24, 2009, 5:59:38 PM
well i hope everything turns out allright.
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*denlm Jan 26, 2009, 12:46:32 PM
Knowing there is a problem is the first step to dealing with it. "It's not until later when things are better in our lives that these feelings can arise to be dealt with." Smart therapist. I'm glad you had him to help you and your fmaily find its footing again. The economy is wrecking damage everywhere right now. I hope your business turns around for you or that another source of funding opens up for you. Oh, and don't get depressed about your family helping out. Thank heavens they are there and care and can help.
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